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        A purple haze coated the night. With it came an aura of paranoia. It flowed through the air, attempting to blanket the night.

        In the earth of the grave plots, burrowing through the soil, a snake slithered upward. It sought a coffin and gnawed at the wood. In its box of eternal slumber, the corpse did not flinch. The snake unhinged its jaw, clamped over the head, and tore the skull free. Bones crumbled apart, leaving twisted fragments along the outer scales of the snake. The creature swam to the surface and emerged. It slithered through the graves, shimmering in the moonlight.

        The scales inverted, forming flesh. Fur grew through new pores and hands extruded out with massive dark wings. He flared his wingspan and shot himself into the night.
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A creature from below.

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:icong-smooth101:
Prose is nice.Sounds like it would work well as a prologue.

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I don't floss, I just bring chaos
:iconmrphilosophy:
is this like an after life for the corpse?
or life for another life.
this makes me think its really griping.

but i wish you wold say more about this creature.
or are you using a lack of information as a tool to make people wonder?

mysteries thats what i like about it.

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you cant prove or disprove god but you can prove that even if he is there the world is still a shit storm and not much is done by his part. if you find your self in a ditch look towards your fellow man to lend you a real hand. prayings not going to cut it
:icondeztornmind:
This is reality. I have more info on char but I don't want to reveal with just cold blunt facts. I also have up'd 'Drip', it has Torne in it. I have another Torne that I haven't posted, but I'm still working things out.
:iconmrphilosophy:
i will take a look at that.

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you cant prove or disprove god but you can prove that even if he is there the world is still a shit storm and not much is done by his part. if you find your self in a ditch look towards your fellow man to lend you a real hand. prayings not going to cut it

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