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Death Comes Halloween        Robby dashed to the next house with his skeleton mask bouncing on his face. He turned to his friend, Max, who wore a striped shirt and an eye patch.   
        “Hey Max, if I get more candy than you, I get a shot with your sister, Cindy.”   
        “No way, dude.”   
        “Pussy.”   
        Robby pressed the doorbell as he rocked on his toes. The door began opening Death Comes Halloween
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Strottenville        Gregor woke with a fright. The sun hadn’t risen yet, but there was no reason not to get an early start. He stumbled to a mirror, still wavering on his feet from the gin. In the mirror, he saw a man who didn’t want to live. His beard had grown unevenly, and his hair hung down to his chin. He forced himself to pull away from the reflection and geared up. As he turned the lights off in his apartment, he grabbed a stale piece of bread out of the trash and ate it quickly. No one was awake in the early morning, instead they hid in their houses, praying to God and trying to pretend the nearby Strottenville
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Monstah        The small black boy adjusted his cape and cowl, and knocked on the door. It creaked open. A large yellow eye hung in the crevice. The pupil awkwardly shifted, straining to see. Below the eye, a large cavernous mouth breathed slowly and deep, drooling black spit onto the welcome mat below. The boy watched the vile liquid seep into the mat.   
        “Shit, you some kinda monstah?”   
        A green tongue lurched out of its gnarled mouth and licked its gums, savoring the dark saliva. &n Monstah
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Leg Snatcher        Jimmy hugged the door with his ear pressed against the surface. He listened to his parents argument. Their voices sank to a whisper then rose accompanied with the sound of slapped flesh. Jimmy smiled, trying to make out all of the words. He didn’t understand half the words, but was still proud.  
 
        His father’s heavy footsteps approached the door. Jimmy jumped back onto his tippy toes and flipped into bed, trying to keep his eyes shut, but not too tight.  
 
        The door swun Leg Snatcher
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Journal Entry: Wed Sep 3, 2008, 8:21 PM


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RANICLA
I've finished the final edit on Ranicla. It's 15278 words. I have more ideas for the story, but I'm leaving it as this for now.


RANICLA



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DOB: 1986
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~lpowell:iconlpowell: Mar 6, 2009, 11:17:49 PM
Dogg you ain't posted nothing in hell of days.
*deZtornmind:icondeZtornmind: Mar 7, 2009, 1:48:57 PM
I know. I'm still alive, and I mean that. I'm still writing; but they're scraps and nothing else. I might post one story that's very abstract.

I'll start posting again regularly, just pulling myself off the ground right now.
~GrimWriter:iconGrimWriter: Dec 25, 2008, 8:28:17 PM
Hey can u help me with a lit submission?

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~FuzzballtheGreat:iconFuzzballtheGreat: Oct 20, 2008, 1:12:09 AM
Just noticed the DD. Good job.

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Viddy well, little brother, viddy well...
~lifeofkewell:iconlifeofkewell: Oct 19, 2008, 5:45:14 AM
wow man, seriously, get a fucken life. all thats comin out of your trappa is fucken shit. i will give you a fucken debate and then we will see who can take losing well.

just face it dude, you lost, now get over it. and like you have said before about deztornmind, how he is all talk because it is over the internet, well look in the mirror mate, i bet you are all talk as well. so get off his fucken back and go find someone else to have a fucken pointless debate with.

get a fucken life mate
~bane2:iconbane2: Oct 19, 2008, 6:55:29 AM
Dude, 1) this was written way back in March. This argument has been finished for months.
2) It's a very small part of an incredibly long argument. Don't jump to conclusions until you've read the full argument.
3) Your grammar is fucking awful.

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I was given this: :star: by *Summon-The-Wolves!
I was 13 years old and I heard [SlipKnot] on the radio so I took a baseball bat and swung into my stereo. Then I went out and bought a Steely Dan CD. And the rest is history.~ZoSoLover202
~lifeofkewell:iconlifeofkewell: Oct 19, 2008, 7:00:00 AM
you dont see your own problem, do you? all you can find in everyone around you is their faults, nothing else. that is why i am saying to you, get a life.
~bane2:iconbane2: Oct 19, 2008, 9:02:38 AM
You don't know me, don't think you can judge me.

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I was given this: :star: by *Summon-The-Wolves!
I was 13 years old and I heard [SlipKnot] on the radio so I took a baseball bat and swung into my stereo. Then I went out and bought a Steely Dan CD. And the rest is history.~ZoSoLover202
*deZtornmind:icondeZtornmind: Oct 17, 2008, 7:33:36 PM
You're not the first to ask what the point of the stories are. My initial intentions were to write eight novels simultaneously, but that flew about 100 miles over my head at the time. I settled for writing twisted flash fictions, because I'm so impatient to get feedback that I write very short pieces. It's difficult to fit a plot so few words, and so I often write a scene that I find interesting. I introduce the characters, show the scene, and wrap it up. The main point of the stories is to show moral diversity. Some of the stories being more obscene than others, I strive to corrupt people's morals and convince the audience to act on freewill rather than authority, tradition, and adopted morals/ethics. I'm still at work at the novels I'm writing, and I believe they'll illustrate my point much more clearly.

I'll definitely tell you my opinion of your work (prose).
~WingedTerrapin:iconWingedTerrapin: Oct 17, 2008, 7:59:47 PM
Dude, that’s a heavy goal for anyone. And you might want to add that piece of information about your stories being scenes to your description, you’d catch less shit from people who are confused and expecting a complete work.

Your goal is pretty interesting. I don’t quite agree with it, but at least you have direction and purpose with what you’re doing. Personally I see value in tradition and ethics, but I think it’s important to question them and understand them on more then face value. I try my best not to harm other people, not because other people say it’s wrong, but because I see nothing to gain from it. Everyone has different views though. Some people run around killing each other for fun, but it’s not like I’m going to sit them down to tea and cookies and talk them out of it.

I’ll have to flip through your Ranicla stories. I think I’ll like them better after I collect a bit more understanding.

Well, I’d like to warn you about the run on sentences and comma rape ahead of time.

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To live in this world

you must be able
to do three things:
to love what is mortal;
to hold it

against your bones knowing
your own life depends on it;
and, when the time comes to let it go,
to let it go.

-Mary Oliver
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